7 Questions for Authors: Antonella Moretti, author of ‘Parsley & Coriander: Life in China with Italian Flavour’

China is fertile ground for any writer, and the internet  has given a voice to people who aren’t anointed by the Sino Twitterati. Parsley & Coriander: Life in China with Italian Flavour has no mainstream coverage, no Peter Hessler blurb to signal to you that this is the “right” kind of China book. It’s as simple as someone went to China, and wrote what they experienced.

Parsley & Coriander takes place over a year and the narrative is divided among Luisella, Emma, and Astrid, three Italian wives uprooted from Europe and dropped into China via their husbands’ careers.

And this is a China some of you might know: the gated expat compounds. Grimey ESL teachers, these ain’t; these women have drivers, their husbands have careers and for some the prospect of returning to their home country becomes terrifying rather than a cruel daydream.

Formatting is an issue for this book. Sometimes the characters speak with em-dashes, sometimes in quotes, while in other chapters they think in quotes. There’s also too much telling, and not enough happening; some chapters consist of a conversation. You’ll read chapters where not much is happening, and you’ll wonder what the point is.

There is good stuff in the book, though. And that just poses another problem: there isn’t enough of it. Parsley & Coriander should have been about Emma’s failing marriage and her relationship with her driver, Mr. Wang, perhaps told from Luisella’s perspective. Everything else should have served that plot.

But as enjoyable as Emma and Mr. Wang’s story is, it’s too little, too late. Parsley & Coriander is an enjoyable book.

With hints of a much stronger story.


Mrs. Moretti was kind enough to answer some questions about her life in China, her writing process and her to-be-read pile:

Let’s begin with my favorite question during my three years in China: why did you come to China?

I followed my husband. He got a job offer in China and we jumped at the chance, thinking that that could be a great opportunity for the whole family. So far, I’m very happy with our choice. 

There’s a tendency to pull from real experiences for an expat novel. How much of this comes from real life?

Even if it is a novel with invented characters, my book draws fully from the real life of an expat woman in China. It was easy for me to describe the daily life of the characters because they are expat ladies like me. I know the feelings of excitement, fear, loneliness. I understand how an expat wife can feel lost, without a role, overwhelmed. They are privileged ladies, indeed, but they also have to face many challenges. In order to keep their family united, they have to be strong, positive, proactive.

What is your writing process?

For this book, I first sketched the characters, their personality, background and the message I wanted each of them to deliver. Then I outlined a plot, creating a different story for all of them. I wanted some obstacle on their way, something they had to fight to demonstrate their courage.

Luisella prefers to remain in China instead of returning to Italy. Do you sympathize with her point of view?

I do! Even if I love Italy, I wouldn’t go back at the moment. I feel that China gives us more opportunities and it’s a more dynamic place. 

What about China has changed since you arrived? Do you feel anything has changed for the better or worse?

Since I arrived, there are many more skyscrapers in Suzhou. And Technology runs so fast! Now we don’t use cash anymore to pay, and even when we buy baozi at a small stall we use our phone to pay. Sometimes I feel amazed by all these changes, sometimes they scare me. 

One nice thing I noticed, is that pollution is less severe than six years ago when I first arrived in China. The problem still exists, but they made improvements. This comforts me since I plan to live here still for a long time.

What are the top three books in your to-be-read pile?

I’m currently interested in expat novels so I’m reading your “Expat Jimmy” and “South China Morning Blues” by Ray Hecht. I also started a book about the life of factory girls in South China. But I have to admit I’m to busy writing my second book, so I don’t read as much as I should.

Anything else you’d like to share with us?

I’m often contacted by women who have to follow their husband in China and are deadly afraid of moving in this country. It’s easier than you think, girls! Of course, this country has its bad sides, like every other place in the world, but life here can be very convenient. With the right attitude, this experience will be enriching and positive. 


Un grandissimo grazie to Mrs. Moretti for allowing me to read her book and feature it here.

Buy Parsley & Coriander on Amazon, and be sure to check out her blog, in English and Italian. For more updates, follow Mrs. Moretti on Facebook and Twitter.

New ‘Expat Jimmy’ review, courtesy of Becky Ances

Another good review of Expat Jimmy:

Expat Jimmy is a novella, only 60-something pages and is an enjoyable and easily digestible book. It takes place all in one day, the day a new foreign teacher arrives in Wuhan, China and is shown around by a more cynical/jaded teacher named Adam.

Huge thanks to the wonderful Becky Ances. I’m a long-time reader of her blog, Writer. Traveler. Tea Drinker. and I’m thrilled to see her review.

Read her full review here.


Expat Jimmy, a seedy account of someone’s first day in China with a jaded seven-year laowai, is available at Amazon.

Christmas 1995: a review of Donkey Kong Country 2

Christmas as an adult, the same routine:

Mom: What do you want for Christmas?

Me: (long silence) I don’t know.

Why is this question so hard to answer now? Used to, it was easy. As a child my parents didn’t have to ask and at some point a transition happened, from telling them what I wanted for Christmas to being asked. From the primary concern in my life to an afterthought. From Super Nintendo games to…money?

Clothes?

I used to feel sorry for those kids who woke up to blue jeans under the tree. Last Christmas I thanked my sister for my new flannel shirt. It’s red and black.

It matches the one she bought my wife.


You can’t rank the best Christmases by looking too far past your childhood. Whenever the transition happens (and for me I suspect it happened after college, not counting the two years I spent in China. Those were special circumstances), it changes something fundamental in your life. It marks the drop, from childhood to adulthood, from playing SNES all day to “adulting”, the current phrase for people my generation pulled kicking and screaming from their long-term adolescence to the pleasures of paying bills, fighting traffic and raising kids.

My daughter’s five. Her wants are simple, and with each approaching Christmas I think back to my own Christmases. I want to make them as special for her as they were for me, and out of all the great Christmases, Christmas 1995 stands apart.

It came at the right time, in the heyday of 16-bit gaming. Gamepro was still publishing. The Nintendo 64 was still the Ultra 64, not delayed yet, and the PlayStation and Saturn had just come out. There was a particular window when Nintendo hadn’t abandoned the SNES and developers were still pushing the system to its limits while Resident Evil only existed in beta form. In other words, there were good Christmases to come, but 95 won in the presents department.

I had Killer InstinctYoshi’s Island and Donkey Kong Country 2 under the tree.

Rare had torched the gaming world the year before with Donkey Kong Country, billed as the first video game rendered with computer graphics. They had the hype machine going: DKC graced the cover of the December 1994 issue of Gamepro (the first issue my parents bought me), Nintendo Power subscribers received a promotional video hosted by a comedian who’s probably panhandling today. Nintendo pulled out all the stops to make sure the first Donkey Kong Country was the hot seller for Christmas 94.

Donkey Kong Country 2 had no video, but it graced the cover of Gamepro’s December 1995 issue. I’d hoped that would be the start of the trend, but 1996 brought us the Nintendo 64 and the SNES’s death tolls. Christmas 1995 did come at the right time.

Donkey Kong Country 2 earned rave reviews across the board, and on this occasion the reviewers are correct. Good sequels don’t repeat what the first ones did. They examine what the first one did, fill in the gaps, making improvements where needed while leaving what isn’t broken alone.

In Donkey Kong Country 2, Kaptain K. Rool has kidnapped Donkey Kong, locking him away in a castle at the top of Crocodile Isle. Your long climb up Crocodile Isle takes you through a variety of levels and locales. The first Donkey Kong Country had pirate ships and snow levels; Donkey Kong Country 2 ditches the snow levels for swamps, beehives and bramble.

With the success of the first game and Nintendo’s backing, Rare felt free to experiment. Donkey Kong Country 2 takes chances, not just in level design but in extras and sidequests. The bonus levels, a much-hyped feature that Gamepro swore would take players 80 hours to complete makes a return here. The difference is that in Donkey Kong Country 2 they mean something. Completing a bonus level nets you a Kremcoin. 15 Kremcoins gives you access to a Lost World level while all 75 lets you in the Lost World’s volcano, where the final boss, Kaptain K. Rool, is pissed and ready for a rematch.

Donkey Kong Country 2 also introduces DK Coins. They are hidden in the regular levels and are prizes for finishing bonus levels in the Lost World. Just as there is an incentive for collecting Kremcoins, your reward for collecting every DK Coin is the coveted 102% completion…and Cranky Kong’s approval as Diddy stands in 1st place in the video game hall of heroes, ahead of Link and Mario.

Diddy returns, this time as the hero. His partner is a female Kong named Dixie, prompting many an under the radar joke in mid-nineties gaming mags, Diddy has the same abilities as the last game while Dixie can use her ponytail to helicopter across pits and dangerous enemies. Together, the two monkeys can throw one another to access out-of-the-way areas, bonus levels and DK coins. Both of them are fairly weak, unable to destroy larger enemies.

The soundtrack is as imaginative as the levels. Each track complements the level, where it’s the Hothead Bop for the lava levels, the Bayou Boogie as you jump from tadpole to tadpole or Stickerbrush Symphony for the bramble levels. In the final Lost World level, you transform into Squawks the parrot, fighting against the wind. Stickerbrush Symphony roars in the background, sweeping you from your real life concerns into the life-or-death world of platform gaming.

1995 in video games. Changes we haven’t seen the likes of since. Think about it: Donkey Kong Country 2 came out the same year the 32-bit PlayStation and Saturn with the Nintendo 64 on the horizon. The last time “next-gen” meant a real change.

Rare understood this, and they could have made Donkey Kong Country 1.5 and called it a day. They didn’t. They pushed themselves, and their hard work and good timing made Christmas 1995 the best, enriching the lives of millions lucky enough to be kids in the heyday of 16-bit gaming.


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New Expat Jimmy Review

On a day in which my website was hacked and I had to endure Facebook burying my posts because I won’t pay them to show it, I mean “boost” it, some good news came flying in over the transom: another Expat Jimmy review.

Jetlagged and tired, Jimmy sees Wuhan, goes to many different places (and manages to not collapse from exhaustion!) and listens to Adam’s endless China tips. Crazy taxi rides, construction works everywhere, baijiu, hot water, accidents, shady clubs… this is China!

This review comes courtesy of Marta, who lives in Suzhou with her husband. She works as a translator and blogs about her life in China in both English and Spanish.

Check out her blog. Huge thanks to Marta for doing the review. Not all writers have automatic support systems thanks to their pedigree or gender, nor do we get book deals and coverage thanks to big media connections, so I appreciate every review I get.

In the meantime, if you haven’t already, check out Expat Jimmy, a tale of James’s first day in China, and the jaded seven-year laowai who shows him the dark side of expat life. Taking place in one day, it’s unique among expat novels in its approach, at least until someone well-connected writes a neutered version of the same book.

At that point, Expat Jimmy will be forgotten, so review it while it’s hot…

Expat Jimmy review roundup + TV Tropes page

I wish I had the support some other authors have, but I am thankful for the few reviews Expat Jimmy has received. They are genuine, and I’ll take four real reviews over a bunch of tossed-off five star write-ups from either people who expect a future favor from me or buddies in the publishing industry.

I am further detaching day-by-day.

On to the reviews:

First we have Quincy Carroll, author of Up to the Mountains, Down to the Countryside, which I reviewed here. It was recently reissued by Camphor Press out of Taiwan with a new edit.

 I very much enjoyed this story by Travis Lee and would recommend it to anyone who has spent time in Asia. There’s an undeniable sense of nostalgia permeating the narrative, and Lee successfully captures the “sensory overload” aspect of stepping off the plane for the first time. Tons of books have been written on the subject, but many devolve into stereotype and/or condescension. Expat Jimmy takes an honest look at what it’s like to transplant oneself across countries and cultures, and for that reason, I’d recommend it to those unfamiliar with China, too.

Ray Hecht, author of South China Morning Blues (which I reviewed and recommended here), offered his take:

In some ways the narrative is not particularly original—many expat authors (yours truly included) have covered the angle of an ESL westerner intrigued and shocked by the modern East. However, in condensing this rather archetypal story into one day, Lee succeeds at capturing the essence of this sort of story. Wasting no time, his tour of Wuhan in the mid-aughts covers everything a reader could want: all full of wonder, disgust, fear, and hope.

Jocelyn Eikenberg was kind enough to feature Expat Jimmy on her blog Speaking of China:

In 62 gripping pages, we follow the eponymous newcomer on a tour through Wuhan with Adam, a rather unscrupulous ESL teacher involved in some shady business. Lee skillfully captures those little details of living in China easily forgotten to longtime expats. It reminded me of how China appeared to me once upon a time, when I was still fighting jetlag and struggling to speak Mandarin.

And finally, Arthur Meursault. He wrote a great satire called Party Members which didn’t receive nearly the coverage it deserved. You can read my review here or go on Amazon and check some of the better reviews. David I Cahill’s is a good one.

The amount of places visited is unrealistic, though I can understand that the author is trying to present an introduction to all the weird and wonderful aspects of life in China within the vehicle of a one-day timeline. It doesn’t quite work and there is almost a little too much happening within the one hundred pages of this story for it to settle in the reader’s head and leave an impression

Huge thanks to the people who reviewed Expat Jimmy. I appreciate it. I’ll post more reviews as they come in.

In the meantime, check out the Expat Jimmy‘s TV Tropes page.